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Confusing Lines To You

May 4, 2011
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

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You spill blue water on my tunes,
You puncture my heart to make me bleed,
You spend nights attempting new dangerous moves,
I feel like I'm going to lose,
I'm going to lose you,
I'll miss your feral smiles,
when your planning something,
but you dare not to tell me.
You say I'm always,
using confusing lines,
they're only confusing to you,
You may not understand these poetic lines,
but I sure do...
They could be lyrics,
a poetic tune,
but you couldn't tell,
from my confusing lines to you...

© Willis S., Salt Lake City, UT

The author's comments:
" I'm talking to someone who just don't understand the way I tell them how I feel, They don't understand what they mean, but I do."
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SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 2:06 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
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Wow thanks!!:)
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 2:52 am
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omg i love this poem sooo much