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Confusing Lines To You

May 4, 2011
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

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You spill blue water on my tunes,
You puncture my heart to make me bleed,
You spend nights attempting new dangerous moves,
I feel like I'm going to lose,
I'm going to lose you,
I'll miss your feral smiles,
when your planning something,
but you dare not to tell me.
You say I'm always,
using confusing lines,
they're only confusing to you,
You may not understand these poetic lines,
but I sure do...
They could be lyrics,
a poetic tune,
but you couldn't tell,
from my confusing lines to you...

© Willis S., Salt Lake City, UT

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" I'm talking to someone who just don't understand the way I tell them how I feel, They don't understand what they mean, but I do."
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SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 2:06 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 306 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

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Wow thanks!!:)
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 2:52 am
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it.&quot;<br /> &quot;Life&#039;s like an hour glass glued to a table.&quot;

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omg i love this poem sooo much