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July 6, 2011
By savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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stars r real
stars r fake
light in the sky
in the moon’s wake

dreams and fantasies
hopes lifted high
symbols of everything
that help u get by

balls of gas
glowing and hot
stars have double meaning
more often than not

but then again
most of us do
masks of meaning
when we r blue

we walk thru life
acting it out
we don’t even know
what the play is about

endlessly the maze
of life goes on
so we watch the stars
hoping for the dawn

© Jessica P., Bethel Park, PA

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savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 9:12 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
45 articles 9 photos 564 comments

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It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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Really?  You think it's brilliant?  Thanks!
Destinee BRONZE said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 9:09 pm
Destinee BRONZE, Oakville, Other
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Blegh. - Abraham Lincoln

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This is amazing. Honestly. Just brilliant.
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 6:44 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

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Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Yup, new fans are awesome, aren't they? :) 

Thanks for looking at my poem.

Cool, keep on noticing stuff, it leads to fantastic poems ;)

 

savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 6:24 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
45 articles 9 photos 564 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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Hey! :D New fan! I shall look at your stuff too.  I wrote this because I noticed how many people wear masks all the time, never revealing their true selves.
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 6:00 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Wow, this is deep. I love how the poem revolves around the stars, there seems to be a much deeper meaning to it, just like you speak about in your poem. 
savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 12:06 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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The second to last is my favorite too.  This is one of my better poems. :)
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 11:42 am
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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Very nice! I loved what I think you were trying to get across with this one, and the poem itself is quite meaningful. It flows rather well, with a clever foundation. The second to last stanza was probably my favorite.
savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 9:49 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
45 articles 9 photos 564 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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Nice to know people actually read my poems and like them.  I have posted more stuff it's just taking forever for them to put it up.
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 9:46 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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You think I'm as good as he is!?

OH MY GOD! Because I think he's way better than me. 

And you're wrong. You're really good too. :)

Post more stuff! 

savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 9:37 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
45 articles 9 photos 564 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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Hey thanks! :D I'm nowhere near as good as you or Thesilentraven but I appreciate it.
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 9:34 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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THis isn't my favorite poem of yours but I do like it. A lot. :)