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Intence poem. It's kinda . . . In the rough, though. It's got a beat, it just neads to be formatted that way.
It's one of those poems that's kind of depresing, but so true that it's incredible.
Wow, I love this one, with so much meaning. It is good how you are like aware of this kinda stuff considering your age (yeah, like i can talk!) :)
On a more negative note, I just want to mention the lining (I have decided that that is what it is called) again.
As you can probs see from my comments (LOL, I told you that I would comment :D) and stuff that I love lining.
I think that if you did it, it would make your poems more powerful than they already are (and they are really powerful!) :)
Please write more poems :)
Well, i don't have any friends that are on the site with me. It's pretty sad really.
But I'm going to be holding a contest soon. Enter a new poem in that and if you win i will do something special that will help you get views! I'm going to give you a secret in on the contest : It's going to be called personification poetry contest. Hope you enter.
Also, I just try to help as many people out as i can in hopes that they will return the favor. Do that maybe (if you don't already)!
well, I don't really have any friends on the site that i can recommend you to. I'm alone in this hobby of mine! :) kind of sad though,really.
Ummm, I was planning on judging my own poetry contest (it'll be in the forums) really soon. So be looking for it! Whenever i post it enter a poem in it (maybe a new one if you can). then, if you win, then I have a special prize thing that could help you out in getting more views. Plus, I'm going to give you a secret in on the contest: It's going to be called "Personification Poetry Contest". Be thinking about it!
I just try to critique lots of people poetry because usually they'll be thankful i helped them, and they might return the favor. Try that.
