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My caprice

June 14, 2011
By Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
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Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
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"sha'ahnleh: they danced with fate"-the kiesha'ra series by amelia atwater-rhodes

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Let this be our Caprice,
Let your eyes;you--
Be mine.
Every look, glance near you,
My love, (my everything)
You shine.

Your life? More important.
My life? Pointless without you.
Perfect:
You are perfect
With everything
You do.

Explainable?unexplainable.
This feeling has no name.
Aching; strongly.
Reaching; softly.
Passionate; untame.

Words do not understand,
Can't comprehend
Can't say:
All I see
Hear
Touch;
THINK--
you you you.

My unimaginable--
Unexpected--
Sudden: complete universe;
Through and
Through.

© Preston M., Galesburg, IL

The author's comments:
If venerability is strength then my love makes me the strongest person alive. Open-ness isn't a strong point Of mine. But this captures how open he makes me Perfectly. I live my life for my love who makes ne laugh. <3 and cliché level of this that I've written aside, it's the truth.
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