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Pretty Little Spies

May 25, 2011
By DeePiper PLATINUM, Gainesville, Texas
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DeePiper PLATINUM, Gainesville, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Poetry flows. Right from my heart, to the paper. The best poems create themselves within your heart, and your mind...well, the mind interprets them... See, think of your heart as the artist, and your mind as the audience... get it?"

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Right now, right here
his intentions will be clear
Open eyes, closed door
we wonder what he has in store
Taste and touch, senses all collide
no lines uncrossed, no rules to abide
His pretty little spies
with thousand little spy trained eyes
Creep across our burning skin
merging with the mood we're in
Open locks, minds; closed door
not just one, wanting more
Be it rough or gentle slow
what he's made of we will know.

© Chelsea D., Aberdeen, SD

The author's comments:
This was one of many of my attempts to cram several thoughts into one poem the best I could..
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faerest BRONZE said...
on Jul. 23 2011 at 2:03 pm
faerest BRONZE, St Paul, Minnesota
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no problem! we're only stating a fact... your work is beautiful :)
DeePiper PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 2:50 am
DeePiper PLATINUM, Gainesville, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Poetry flows. Right from my heart, to the paper. The best poems create themselves within your heart, and your mind...well, the mind interprets them... See, think of your heart as the artist, and your mind as the audience... get it?&quot;

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It means a lot that yall like it, thanks for the comments:)
DeePiper PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 2:50 am
DeePiper PLATINUM, Gainesville, Texas
32 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Poetry flows. Right from my heart, to the paper. The best poems create themselves within your heart, and your mind...well, the mind interprets them... See, think of your heart as the artist, and your mind as the audience... get it?&quot;

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thank you!
MayhemMadness said...
on Jun. 23 2011 at 9:09 pm
MayhemMadness, Lakeland, Florida
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I agree^^ Thats my fav part. I really like it! 4 stars!
Jadorelespoemes said...
on Jun. 23 2011 at 8:44 pm
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Aww :). I love this poem ♥. Good job!
faerest BRONZE said...
on Jun. 23 2011 at 7:41 pm
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"Taste and Touch, senses all collide no lines uncrossed, no rules to abide..." I LOVE this part of your poem... its very beautifully written :)