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Inspiration

May 21, 2011
By Rayne GOLD, Chippewa Falls, Wisconsin
Rayne GOLD, Chippewa Falls, Wisconsin
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Your voice
is poetry
You speak
and throw ideas at me
While I try to catch them
Your eyes
are the song
I can't get out of my head
Trying to sleep
Lying in bed
Your steps
are the rythmn
to the lyrics
I scratch down on paper
Because it makes me feel better
Your touch
is the feeling
I try to capture
but haven't yet mastered.



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on Sep. 9 2011 at 9:58 pm
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
There are people who finish what they start and.....

I really liked it especially all the comparisons!!!!! 5 Stars

on Aug. 4 2011 at 2:09 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

Very cool. i like this a lot. i love the line "your eyes are the song i can't get out of my head", it's as if you can see through his eyes and into his mind where music is bouncing around. You should publish the poem you entered into the contest! Send it in! It was great, thank you for entering! :)