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.Slap.
May 7, 2011
It's the sting of disappointment,
the warmth of rage,
spreads across your face,
it's like a brand,
like a warning,
and it can't be taken back.
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This article has 7 comments.
CountryMusic said...
on Jan. 26 2013 at 10:03 pm
Nice, I like how the title has a dot on either side, emphasizes the shortness. Blunt and well done :)
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:30 am
Thank you so much!
TheHangingGirl BRONZE said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:08 am
Very strong, And very to the point. I love how emotional your poems get in only a few words or so. I love it. 5/5
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 1:20 pm
Thanks! I will.
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 9:53 pm
"Destinies Entwined" is in the poetry forum.
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 9:52 pm
This poem is short but true, and it really hits home. The words you chose were wonderfully used. Good Job!
If you can please comment on my poem "Destinies Entwined" that would be great!
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