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Drowning Deep Under

April 23, 2011
By Karma BRONZE, Brielle, New Jersey
Karma BRONZE, Brielle, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
The swallows will always sing around the smoke stacks

The feeling of drowning
Is slowly creeping
Father and father down
Into Darkness

Deaf to the sound of reason
Losing all feeling of you
Being blind to what is right in front of you
It’s all a part of drowning

When you drown
Nothing matters
You lose all sense
Of whom you really are inside

The author's comments:
I have know people who have drowned, but have always swam back to the surface before drowning too deep

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This article has 2 comments.

MollyMonster said...
on Oct. 17 2011 at 4:44 pm
Nyet, I can't be british....EVERYBODYS RUSSIAN!

on Sep. 2 2011 at 7:17 pm
JenJenJ-Wow PLATINUM, Brielle, New Jersey
38 articles 61 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dealing with backstabbers, there was one thing I learned. They're only powerful when you've got your back turned.
You've got enemies? Good. That means you actually stood up for something in your life.

yo karma, i love it!  is it supposed to say farther and farther though, or r u now british? ;)