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Eye Lash

April 23, 2011
By WriterGirl33 PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
WriterGirl33 PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to not speak and let people think you are a fool, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt.


I LASH OUT.
the hurt is too great
it's just those eyes blinding my mind
I LASH OUT.
picture in my head
to block out the entire universe
he is all i see
with my mind blinded by cold eyes
I LASH OUT.
they stare at my life
always there
a vulture circling its prey
there to torture with
an undying stare
I LASH OUT.


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on Jul. 1 2011 at 10:11 pm
towritelove37 GOLD, Kewanna, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can't always get what you want...

very complex, but a great start! repetition is good, but maybe a bit overdone? great poem! keep writing! check out some of my poems?