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Oh Beautiful Rain

April 18, 2011
By sincere_red SILVER, Freehold, New Jersey
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"Every woman is wrong until she cries, then she's right, insantly"

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Rain so pure
And innocent,
You make me
Feel alive.
I watch your
Majestic tears
Falling form
The sky,
And I can’t
Suddenly stop
From stripping off
My old worn shoes
And dancing in
Your beauty.
I can feel
The worried looks
From those around,
But all
I want is
To feel your soft
Caresses
As you,
Oh beautiful
Rain, poor down.

© Greg K., New Lenox, IL

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FatesMistake13 said...
on May. 14 2011 at 4:47 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
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&quot;Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one&#039;s mistakes.&quot; Oscar Wilde <br /> <br /> &quot;The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame.&quot;

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i meant smoothly not soomthly
FatesMistake13 said...
on May. 14 2011 at 4:46 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
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Like the two poeple who commented before me were soooo right. This flows so soomthly and i love the way you ended it. Beautiful written:)
Express-- PLATINUM said...
on May. 14 2011 at 11:02 am
Express-- PLATINUM, River Vale, New Jersey
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Very well. I even think you should add to it a litle, becasuse I agree with sorlageal, it has a great flow;
Sorla_the_Space_Cowboy GOLD said...
on May. 13 2011 at 11:30 pm
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wonderfully worded! It flows, so well.