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Purple Days

April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


On purple days I feel serene
like a faint whisper
in the forest
saying calm
on a cool calm spring day


The author's comments:
It was an assignment for school we had to write a simile. I was thinking of my name.

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on Jul. 8 2011 at 7:12 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

haha i'm more relaxed at school then at home

on Jul. 8 2011 at 1:44 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

I love how you described that, i definately have those days manly during the school year though

on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:14 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thnaksi like ur screen name

on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:13 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i don't want to sound stupiid but what is synestesia

on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:12 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i don't want to sound stupid but what is synestesia

Finchy BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 11:33 pm
Finchy BRONZE, Fort Myers, Florida
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Musicispassion,

Whether you intended it or not, your use of synestesia really makes this poem stand out. I not only love the categoriazation of a day by color, but then comparing it to a sound makes "Purple Days" very easy to identify with. Just by reading this poem, I figured out that today was a purple day. Keep up the good work.

Cheers

Finchy


on Jun. 27 2011 at 3:09 pm
WritingSpasms, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Devils run when a good man goes to war."
- River Song from Doctor Who (Ep. A Good Man Goes to War)

I like this one. It's more simple than the Yellow poem, but I love the reoccuring cat theme I'm picking up. :)

on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:31 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

This was a great, simple poem. I especially love the picture you chose to go along with it! :) Cats are definitely serene.

iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 15 2011 at 9:23 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
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Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

awwww its ok i love your name too and your impatience is funny

on May. 14 2011 at 1:52 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i am impatienet and i love my name

on May. 13 2011 at 9:43 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

um sorry thanks

iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 9:00 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

you are really impatient some times and conseded when you talk about your name but it is really awesome

on May. 13 2011 at 12:26 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

please comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative

on May. 11 2011 at 6:24 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you so much

alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:30 pm
alex198, |, Other
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Once again short, simple and a great image. You have such a unique way of describing things, it's really interesting and it's what makes your poetry stand out and mean something. I really like it :)

on May. 9 2011 at 10:23 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

anyone plz comment i love to hear feedback