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April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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Your memory and love
will be passed down
as if it were a
stained and holey pair of hand
me down jeans

© Jennifer A., Plattsburgh, NY

The author's comments:
I was thinking of seeing my great grandma lying in her coffin looking peaceful and calm. She was a beautiful person inside and out.I hope people will get that dying isn't as horrible as people make it out to be.
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musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 10:13 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thank you means alot
snaomi PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 10:10 pm
snaomi PLATINUM, Cheshire, Connecticut
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totally beautiful.  short but with so much impact.  love it.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 16 2011 at 10:22 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thank you it means alot
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:30 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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I can really feel your grief in this poem. It was good, very emotionally resonating. Good job, and my condolences. I know what it's like to lose a loved one.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 14 2011 at 1:49 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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your welcome and i will email you
iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 9:45 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
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Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.<br /> laugh ur heart out<br /> dance in the rain<br /> cherish the moment<br /> ignore the pain<br /> live, laugh, love<br /> forgive&amp;forget<br /> lifes too short to be<br /> living with regrets

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and thanks for knowing how to spell my name
iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 9:45 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
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Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.<br /> laugh ur heart out<br /> dance in the rain<br /> cherish the moment<br /> ignore the pain<br /> live, laugh, love<br /> forgive&amp;forget<br /> lifes too short to be<br /> living with regrets

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its katelyn
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 9:40 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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are you katelyn or emily
iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 7:24 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
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Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.<br /> laugh ur heart out<br /> dance in the rain<br /> cherish the moment<br /> ignore the pain<br /> live, laugh, love<br /> forgive&amp;forget<br /> lifes too short to be<br /> living with regrets

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oh dont worry i will luvs u and email me so i can talk to u so u can talk to me without a phone haha

 

musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 12:30 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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please comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:06 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thank you you should look at some of my other stuff
iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 11 2011 at 9:57 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
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Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.<br /> laugh ur heart out<br /> dance in the rain<br /> cherish the moment<br /> ignore the pain<br /> live, laugh, love<br /> forgive&amp;forget<br /> lifes too short to be<br /> living with regrets

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hey u i love it its so good but it makes me wanna cry
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 11 2011 at 6:19 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks it means so much

 

alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:42 pm
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And btw, I know how you feel. It sucks when no one comments on your work :( but you're really good so don't let it get you down. :) Sometimes people just don't bother... x
alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:40 pm
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I loved the comparison in this one! You found two things that are so different and made them sound the same. Really well written! I loved it :D
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 8 2011 at 3:13 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks

 

Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER said...
on May. 7 2011 at 8:01 pm
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
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&quot;Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it.&quot;<br /> &quot;Life&#039;s like an hour glass glued to a table.&quot;

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hey hey hey love your poem so much keep it up loves u
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 5 2011 at 10:09 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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hahaha sweet i'll look get ready 2 party
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER said...
on May. 5 2011 at 7:41 pm
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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&quot;It takes a great deal of courage to stand up to our enemies, but a great deal more to stand up to our friends.&quot;<br /> -Professor Dumbledore to Harry Potter<br /> &quot;What doesn&#039;t kill you, makes you stronger.&quot;<br /> -Unknown

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So hey I know that I already left you a commment but I just had to let you know that I wrote something new... if you search If Only... then it should be there. :)
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER said...
on May. 5 2011 at 6:24 pm
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It takes a great deal of courage to stand up to our enemies, but a great deal more to stand up to our friends.&quot;<br /> -Professor Dumbledore to Harry Potter<br /> &quot;What doesn&#039;t kill you, makes you stronger.&quot;<br /> -Unknown

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Hey you well as you know now I AM going to the meet and I just can't wait cuz I'm gunna be the best runner there with a hurt knee lol!