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Through the window

March 29, 2011
By gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
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You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

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As i look
i see a man
with his lady
acting as though
nothing is bad
then i see
the man lift
a hand and
hit her, hard
she starts crying
he starts yelling
and shaking her
i can hear a little
he calls her names
horrible names
that she doesnt
deserve to live
then he pulls something out
a black thing
then i hear a sound
i then her
now you won't bother me no more
thats all i see through
the window

© Bonnie S., Fremont, CA

The author's comments:
in class we had to write a poem or a story using the words through the window and i decide to make the poem about how just because something may look perfect on the outside doesn't mean it is.
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