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From God to Flawed*

March 12, 2011
By RantingRaven BRONZE, San Jose, California
RantingRaven BRONZE, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Mourn the nights passing, beseech the days lasting.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Anonymous


A peace to my heart
A beat so timid and meek
With talons kempt
No more will they rake or reap

Juvenile distance
And a denial of persistence
Levied this land
Finite in the everlasting sands

An element that is never in days
But never is always
For from the dark that once was
Only the light was made and ‘twas

Justly justice for just justices
Oh, how it was for we must
The pain had once ‘paled so deep
We must, while we weep, so long without sleep

God creates, but god may never
God loves, but love is a flaw
God conceives, but never thinks
God judges, but is never judged by those who believe

The god we have is flawed
Only because he is infallible
Only because:
The overpowered
The overestimated
The overperceived
The undetermined
The peace that is kempt

God is undiscovered, but never discoverable
Science is god, but unfortunately infallible


The author's comments:
*In the stanzas: If they rhyme. They rhyme.

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