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Deeper

February 9, 2011
By MadiNomNomMonster BRONZE, Hoschton, Georgia
MadiNomNomMonster BRONZE, Hoschton, Georgia
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Falling.
DEEPER,
Into a state of despair.
Not knowing if the sun willl radiate once more,
In this new, somber universe.
I squall,
But to no avail.
The wind hisses my name,
Beckoning me into its thorny branches.
My arms are deadened,
My legs grow frigid.
I'm Being swallowed by a beast,
My own imagination.
As into a state of despair,
DEEPER
I fall.

As I fall,
The colors around me burst with life.
The wind no longer whispers,
Instead hums a smooth lullaby.
No longer a struggle to survive,
But a pleasure to be alive.
Knowing that I,
Can change my reality,
My perspective,
My life.

No longer do I fall.
But now I,
DRIFT
into a state of peace.



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on Apr. 30 2011 at 11:29 am
MadiNomNomMonster BRONZE, Hoschton, Georgia
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thank you (:

TheDuck GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 2011 at 10:14 am
TheDuck GOLD, Braselton, Georgia
11 articles 12 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Raids, bullets, crime... no problem. A missing duster? Crisis.&quot;-The Last Sacrifice<br /> &quot;If we stand for nothing, we&#039;ll fall for anything.&quot; -All Time Low

Beautiful.  Very deep. 5 stars!