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Total Loss

February 1, 2011
By kagebrubak GOLD, Sidney, Ohio
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kagebrubak GOLD, Sidney, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;As you get closer to the light, the greater your shadow becomes.&quot;<br /> &quot;Never fear shadows. They simply mean there&#039;s a light shining somewhere nearby.&quot;<br /> &quot;The best way to become boring is to say everything.&quot;<br /> &quot;Forget arrogance, just ask and recieve&quot;

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Words cannot describe,
The loss and ddread I feel.
When i walk out on this plain,
All my fears are real.
I just can't help it,
When tears fall unbidden,
From my face,
To water the sunbaked Earth.

© Virginia S., Duxbury, MA

The author's comments:
Death destroys all. But we can all hope to have at least one person to remembers us and pray for our souls to be accepted into heaven.
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