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The Darkness….

January 29, 2011
By anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
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anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
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All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream. -Edgar Allan Poe<br /> ~&quot;Paper is more patient than people,&quot;~Anne Frank<br /> &quot;Inspiration from the heart is written in the dark.&quot;~Anisa Nasir

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Sitting in the rain..
In the grasp of the darkness.
Lying over you and your tell-tale heart..
Wishing it was a mistake...


You swore to me..
You would never leave.
But there you were..
Murdered in Cold blood.

It took over...
Our long-lived battle lost..
It makes subtle movements across...
Giving up all we had..
But I know I will see you again..

The author's comments:
This piece came to me after reading a few mystery books and ideas began to start flowing. So i recorded them and this is what it looks like.
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anisanasir_11 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 5:43 pm
anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
23 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream. -Edgar Allan Poe<br /> ~&quot;Paper is more patient than people,&quot;~Anne Frank<br /> &quot;Inspiration from the heart is written in the dark.&quot;~Anisa Nasir

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Thankss so much :) It really means alot :D
DaughteroftheTrumpet BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 5:38 pm
DaughteroftheTrumpet BRONZE, East Aurora, New York
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Washington Irving once said &ldquo;There is sacredness in tears. They are not the mark of weakness, but of power. They are messengers of overwhelming grief and of unspeakable love.&rdquo;

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my cousin was murdered in a car crash, and i can just imagine his girlfriend relating exactly to this because she was with him when he hit the tree, and survived without a scratch.

its really moving, and very strong. as always, amazing job Nisi!

anisanasir_11 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 5:02 pm
anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream. -Edgar Allan Poe<br /> ~&quot;Paper is more patient than people,&quot;~Anne Frank<br /> &quot;Inspiration from the heart is written in the dark.&quot;~Anisa Nasir

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Thanks :) 

Im sure that if u let ur pen flow on ur paper and jot down things and put them together you can come up with a masterpiece :)

inksplatteredfingerz SILVER said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 4:50 pm
inksplatteredfingerz SILVER, Union, New Jersey
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&quot;Where I&#039;m from, we believe all sorts of things that aren&#039;t true--we call it history.&quot;--the Wizard; Wicked

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nice! i wish i could write poetry like this. it was so deep and kind of mysterious. good job=)