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Paranoia
January 18, 2011
I wonder if I were to close my eyes and take a leap,
Would I still be normal?
Or would you call me a freak?
I still think of ways to just let the past go.
But my past gave me scars.
It's something I never really wanted to show.
So if I promised to stop pacing, And tried to keep my brain from racing,
Would you still love me so?
Or would you just let me go?
© Hui Y., Potsdam, NY
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Sketched97 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 11 2013 at 2:36 pm
It was emotional and relatable. Good job.
on May. 31 2013 at 5:46 am
oh my gosh, that was amazing :) great job
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 12:44 pm
thank u very much....i appreciate all comments
GodsGirl36 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 20 2011 at 11:08 am
I love it! :D the voice is great and topic is...amazing :D lovelovelove
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on Feb. 15 2011 at 1:12 pm
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Love this poem, so simple yet so true, keep writing!!
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2011 at 1:57 pm
thank u so much eagle and stormyflight!
Stormyflight GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2011 at 8:04 pm
This poem was seriously awe inspiring, in one of those hit you like a mini sucker punch kinda ways:) Keep it up, dont let anyone tell you you dont have a gift for this!
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