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Losing my Head

January 4, 2011
By RyanTyler PLATINUM, Windsor, Connecticut
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"A myth is a religion in which no one no longer believes." James Feibleman

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“I’d lose my head if it wasn’t attached to my body”
An old saying that to me
Is completely ridicules
If your head were detachable
Who in there right mind
Would take it off?

© Gianna V., Sewell, NJ

The author's comments:
I hear people saying this a lot, and ever sence I heard I've always thought. Why would anyone take off their head in the first place. So yeah hear it is kind of short but I like it. A reveiw would be nice :):):):)
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RyanTyler PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 16 2011 at 12:11 pm
RyanTyler PLATINUM, Windsor, Connecticut
21 articles 0 photos 94 comments

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&quot;A myth is a religion in which no one no longer believes.&quot; James Feibleman

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Thank you.
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 1:48 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
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Hey, not bad.  I never really thought of it like that.
RyanTyler PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 13 2011 at 9:44 am
RyanTyler PLATINUM, Windsor, Connecticut
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Thank you.

 

sunny.all.day. GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 8:46 pm
sunny.all.day. GOLD, Potomac, Maryland
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Haha, I found this funny :) Good job! Honestly, I've only heard the saying a couple of times, but I love what you did with it!
RyanTyler PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 7 2011 at 12:08 pm
RyanTyler PLATINUM, Windsor, Connecticut
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My second artical to reach 100 veiw or more. Thanks you for reading.

 

RyanTyler PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 9:46 am
RyanTyler PLATINUM, Windsor, Connecticut
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Thank you

 

Erecura PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 7:45 pm
Erecura PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
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Ha ha! I thought that was funny. My mom says that to me a lot...
RyanTyler PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 12:13 pm
RyanTyler PLATINUM, Windsor, Connecticut
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Thanks, I'll change that.

 

Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2011 at 4:06 am
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Haha! This is so funny! People say this to me a lot...

by the way, it's "ridiculous" not "ridicules"

But anyway, good job!