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December 19, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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I have to tell you something.
Don’t tell anyone ok?
Promise?
Ok.
Here it is,
But don’t tell…

Did you tell her?!
She said you did.
I promise I won’t be mad,
I just want the truth…

I’ll ask one more time,
I promise I won’t be mad.
The truth.
That can’t be the truth!
Because now THREE other people know.
And I didn’t tell them…

I can’t trust you any more…

Psst,
I have to tell you something.
Don’t tell anyone else, ok?
Pinky promise?
Ok,
Here it is.
But don’t tell…

© Alicia W., Columbia, MO

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Dontcha hate it when the one person you THINK you can trust ends up telling your secret to someone who tells someone else who tells someone ELSE!? Yeah...me too.
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Zazawish777 GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2011 at 10:42 am
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

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life isn&#039;t passing me by, it&#039;s trying to run me over!

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this was awesome. 5 stars. Please rate and comment on  mine plz. 
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 9:50 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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ehhh, merci mais ils ont besoin de l'assistance.
alanacarlene said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 10:25 pm
hahaha i'll definately give you some feedback!
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 8:00 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

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What the front door.

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I know right? i wish you could review them efore i posted them on this sucker. i would back your love feed.
alanacarlene said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 6:21 pm
aw man that's exactly how i feel! i wrote a few haikus and a free verse but theyre not very good except for one haiku :\ ughhhh it's lik a nightmare that will...not...end!
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 3:42 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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dont know, i need to...cause i suck. imma read them over and see if they're ready. someone needs to cut me open and see if im ready, i dont feel like a writer anymore.
alanacarlene said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 6:13 pm
Ok! My internet wasn't working yesterday so i couldn't reply to this message but if i could've i would've said "OMG! yay! I'm totally gonna check em out! i'm excited!" and i was and i did and i loved em! :)
alanacarlene said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 3:31 pm
ah yeah are you gonna post em on teenink?
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 8:05 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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yeah, you know, the brain connections you make everytime you kill the writers block.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 4:20 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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haha synapses? really? welllll at least it's something hahahaha :D
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 3:25 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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HEY!!!! A lot of my poems just got published!!! :) Theres "A Wall", "Crying for the Future", "Not Just Another Sunset", and "An Electric Current, Dancing Lips, Flushed Cheeks, and Bold Smiles"..... I think thats all :P Oh! And my one I translated from Vigil's spanish assignment. Though yours TOTALLY beasted on mine and was amazing. Mine's called "Amor" :P :))))))))))
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 9:47 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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i wrote two last night. something about the synapses...i dont know.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 9 2011 at 4:23 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Yeah haha a funny thought....my writer's block is slowly starting to fade away and i've written 3 things even though they're not that good but still! the point is my writer's block is lessening.
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 9 2011 at 3:56 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

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What the front door.

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...just thethought that occurs...
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 9 2011 at 3:30 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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ahhhahahaha! no i wouldn't've thought that! and i assure you i wouldn't have thought that you were a loser! haha that made me laugh! :D
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 9 2011 at 2:40 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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well yeah, but I figured "if i comment on this shell be like 'now you dumb cow, you're just commenting on all my stuff arent you? just for the sake of the monkey? loser' "
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 8 2011 at 8:07 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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ohh haha yeah feather filled people no hahahaha feather-filled pillow ha :D really you liked it? well thanks
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 8 2011 at 5:37 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

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What the front door.

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feather pillow people. sike. no really, feathered pillow?
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 8 2011 at 5:15 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Well thanks which poem was it? and i prbly would'nt've thought that
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 8 2011 at 4:30 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

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honestly, there was another poem you wrote that I didnt comment on because I didnt want you to thinki was just commenting on all your stuff for the sake of-. but I did like it. sincerity captain.