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November 27, 2010
By Bnubbs PLATINUM, Goshen, Kentucky
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Let it be! All you need is love!

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How long have I been falling?
Falling into a pit of dispair
hopeing this is all a dream
But my heart says it's real.
I wake up.
It feels like i've been gone for a long time.
My eyes are swollen, but there are no tears.
I've been crying.
I feel like I'm screaming, but no sound comes out.
What happened to me?!
What could've hurt me this badly?
Then I remember.
Love

© Michael H., Mildford, CT

The author's comments:
I'm going to leave it up to you to find the meaning behind this poem. but to me in the beggining of the poem I was in a nightmare and I was tossing and turning and then i woke up and i thought it was all a dream. the pain was all a dream. But then i realize that my heart was broken in reality too, and it wasnt just a dream.
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