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Maybe...
November 6, 2010
Perhaps it will rain so hard it will wash away my makeup and lies, uncovering the truth.
If I run fast enough, will the winds take me up above the ground?
Perhaps I will be able to fly level with the clouds, so that the raindrops are merely my tears.
Maybe the winds will then drop me harshly to the ground, and as I plummet, I think it might be the end.
And then maybe you'll be there to catch me.
Maybe.
© Lindsey W., Woodinville, WA
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This article has 2 comments.
WintersRevenge PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2011 at 4:44 pm
Thanks! I'll take that into consideration! I love to hear people's honest opinions about my work :)
sweetly_broken GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2011 at 2:00 pm
i think it does make a good poem! i love poems that are kind of uncertain. It wasn't lacking emotion or anything! I just might suggest taking out the "and" and the beginning of the second to last line. but . . . great job!!
