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Observation Poem

November 1, 2010
By Lexi Conklin SILVER, Bosque Farms, New Mexico
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The edge of her face, scald and blistered with infliction. Her diminutive chapped lips concealed within her face. Frickles environ her facial appearances. Vibrant greenish-blue eyes examine every aspect of life. Square formes white teeth all conformed in the same postions. Her lusterous gleaming lipgloss, reflects its polished effect.

© Mary A., Fullerton, CA

The author's comments:
I was assigned to observe a friend mainly focusing entirely on their facial features, which inspired me to write a poem on her featers that I collected from my observations, but also with a twist of advanced word diction
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