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Bitter Ocean

November 4, 2010
By echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


The bitter ocean stretched out between us
The acid in my stomach becoming more potent
My chest once tight and red from excitement is now pale and blue
His dark gold eyes burn me where i stand
I will now leave him in search of a real man
Who knows maybe he wont hurt me like you did
Goodbye my cruel loving jerk

The author's comments:
"Thank you , your question brought this poem to me. I am forever greatful."

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