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Darkness of the mind

October 31, 2010
By _toni4asec_ GOLD, London, Other
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_toni4asec_ GOLD, London, Other
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That time when you feel like giving up... that's when you actually have to push yourself harder (:

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The dark caverns of the mind






















Where evil and deceit combine























Jealous and envy bids it time






















Anger doubles never divides





















Though hope and pride are inside






















Hate and sorrow won’t let them shine

















To everyone all things look bright






















But inside there is no bulb no light

© Tom M., Philadelphia, PA

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Estelle_Star SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 1:41 pm
Estelle_Star SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
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"I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emtions," James A. Michener.

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I love this poem. It is dark, but in a good way. I thought I could write, but compare to you I can't. You can write and you can draw, that is amazing! You have a lot of serious talent! :D
KaylynVictoria SILVER said...
on Dec. 31 2010 at 2:56 pm
KaylynVictoria SILVER, Breaux Bridge, Louisiana
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Always keep your head up so you never have an excuse to look down at yourself(:

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this is outstanding! ur writing os different but in a good way:)
_toni4asec_ GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 3:03 pm
_toni4asec_ GOLD, London, Other
14 articles 12 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
That time when you feel like giving up... that's when you actually have to push yourself harder (:

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r u kiddin me almost all my poems r like this!!!!