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October 22, 2010
By HarleyPettis PLATINUM, Lawton, Oklahoma
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Tears,
they fall slowly.
Dripping on my paper,
sliding down my face.
My make up running,
tears freezing on my face,
from the cold.
As I sit here,
I think about you.
Oh what would I do
without you?
The thought of it,
scares me to death.
And this fear,
though it may seem irrational,
is the cause of my
tears.

© Kim B., Marblehead, MA

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HarleyPettis PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 9 2010 at 3:04 pm
HarleyPettis PLATINUM, Lawton, Oklahoma
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my bf lol or god
jacktheax said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 8:02 pm

amazing whos the person u think about lol

 

HarleyPettis PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 7:26 pm
HarleyPettis PLATINUM, Lawton, Oklahoma
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thanx :D i really appreciate ur feedback :)
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 3:26 pm
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this is really good I like it
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I can completely connect with this, it's really good. I love the simplicity of it :). Keep it up!
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and the ending lines is how i know it's a poem :) good job.

i like reading poetry, it's soothing in my mind. Though i SUCK at writing it myself

2011cblazier BRONZE said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 11:21 am
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This is really good! I like it!!!!
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it flowed as my own it's really good.
einzige said...
on Nov. 4 2010 at 7:59 pm
its good, keep writing !