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Snowfall

October 8, 2010
By maxxykat94 PLATINUM, Centreville, Virginia
maxxykat94 PLATINUM, Centreville, Virginia
29 articles 4 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do everything with excellence.


Snow falls, less hesitant now
Racing to the ground,
The frowning, yawning, grumbling ground

It coats all in white, a Queen’s white
Nature’s courtly splendor. Majesty

Peaceful, the trees make no sound
From behind cold cold glass I watch

A lovely dance, a splendid rush
Building up, then bunching together

At an angle, bent slantways by the wind
Whirling whirling, feathery flakes

A crystalline snow-globe,
With patches of color here and everywhere

Poe’s Raven above the street
A witness to the whiteness

He disappears; a black cloaked human counterpart passes below
Cold, a white brick road

A silent brick road.
None dare disturb it

Oh! to be free,
Free as a snowflake

No bounds, no destinations, carefree and listless
Hovering ‘bove heav’n and ‘low the Curtain

Can it be – a snowflake can travel down and back?
Will it survive the journey?

Now it stops, outside the window
A subdued storm.

All is quiet
And the frost reigns


The author's comments:
Snowfall in January.

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on Nov. 18 2010 at 6:39 pm
maxxykat94 PLATINUM, Centreville, Virginia
29 articles 4 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do everything with excellence.

thank you :]

Swordpen GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 1:33 pm
Swordpen GOLD, Mattapoisett, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Nobody's perfect well there was this one guy but we killed him" -From "Lamb" by Christopher Moore

The vocabulary use really paints a picture its really nice