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Withdrawal

September 28, 2010
By henlady GOLD, Oakland, California
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henlady GOLD, Oakland, California
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The most wasted day of all is that on which you have not laughed.

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He is gone
The words echo as the sudden cracking of ice rings
Falling down
Struggling to get back up
The numbness spreads
Fingertips lose sensation
Legs and arms flail
The urge to fight vanishes
Eyes close
Gone
Sinking down
Eyes flutter
Then shut again
Gone

© Britney G., Green Bay, WI

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