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D0awn's Promise

September 29, 2010
By hadiya.r14 BRONZE, Pleasant Grove, Alabama
hadiya.r14 BRONZE, Pleasant Grove, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is all memory, except for the one present moment that goes by you so quickly you hardly catch it going."

Dew drops twinkling like diamonds
Shook with the wind
But clutched determinedly to a lacey web
That veiled the blooming bush of scarlet,
Velvet petaled roses and shivered
In sync with the rest of the world as the
Cold dawn atmosphere fades
A ghostly reminder of the bitter night

The light blue sky shy with spots of soft pink
Covers the nightly stars like a blanket
Golden rays of sunlight
Leak into the darkest crevices
Waking whatever lie in their paths
With a bath of glorious warmth
A radiant promise of day

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on Oct. 10 2010 at 1:34 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

this is so good! you are such a great writer. i love the visual here. you are really good at creating a stunning scene.

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. keep writing