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confess to me

September 19, 2010
By SassyJones GOLD, Los Altos Hills, California
SassyJones GOLD, Los Altos Hills, California
13 articles 5 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We make our fourtunes, and we call them fate" earl of beaconsville.

Confess to me
your feelings
of this soft screaming

Undress me
Caress me
let me share
your reeling

don't lie
i'm fine
i'm not so little

defensless, not really
your about my equal

it's a chance
it might be
a broken sunset

but you can't
live your life

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on Oct. 23 2011 at 11:08 am
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

I like this. If i may though i've got one point of criticism. maybe you could add a little more imagery to this. you got a lot of  potential though