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Angel*Rose

August 29, 2010
By BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)


Alone
Doesn't exist
For us

Fallen from grace
But we'll be back
Wings fly us to our place
Can't keep us
Down

Shredded apart
Ruby petals,
plucked and dropped
Scoop me up
Let the Angel take me away

Safe from the
Fires
When you're with me
Don't be afraid
Have hope
Faith
In me
Your
Glass tears
Shatters into hard diamonds
Swirls of dark hair
Shadows

My own tears
Are locked away
And never by daylight seen
Let the gold wishes pass
Take my hand

Tarnished
and dented
But they can't take us down
We are the only
Fire
and Ice
Sun
and Moon
Co-existing

I see through
The feathered mask
White gleaming wings
Can't hide your face
Sparkling
In what can be tears
Or what could be
Love

But do you see it?
I enclose myself
Blood red petals
Curl tighter
Against the raining sky
For on the outside
I've placed a lie

Can you break its truth?
My truth?

I need an Angel

And she needs this Rose

*



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on Apr. 11 2011 at 12:17 pm
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
65 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

I don't know why that came out twice... Whoops.

-Angel


on Apr. 11 2011 at 12:16 pm
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
65 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

Don't know when you will be on to read this or even if you will, but hey. I just wanted to remind you what this means. The words you wrote all on your own, the feelings you felt to spur them onto paper and onto this site, they all came from you, and somehow I don't see how something so perfect and pure can just dissapear and fade from existence. I admire your talent and I admire the subject matter of this poem, very much so in fact. I hope you read this and realize that love is never lost. Love is love. "We are the only fire and ice, sun and moon co-existing" Never has more truth been spoken of a mere 6 lines.

-Angel


on Dec. 9 2010 at 9:58 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thank-you!  I appreciate that greatly.  :D 

-Rose


MRose911 GOLD said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 5:24 pm
MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
17 articles 10 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No boy is worth crying over and the one who is won't make you cry." - Sarah Kane

This is amazing! :) Wow you have serious talent! :)

on Oct. 27 2010 at 11:45 am
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
65 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

It's alright, I saw it eventually... :)

-Angel

 


on Sep. 23 2010 at 10:05 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thank you!  But sorry I didn't show you this one sooner.  ;P  <3

-Rose


on Sep. 21 2010 at 12:13 pm
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
65 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

Beautifully written, as always, my dear Rose. Clear as crystal, true as true can be. Don't lose hope.

-Angel