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A Memory

August 29, 2010
By jesus.musik.freak BRONZE, Port St Lucie, Florida
jesus.musik.freak BRONZE, Port St Lucie, Florida
3 articles 4 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your going through hell, keep on going, don't slow down. If your scared don't show it. You might get out before the devil even knows your there. - Rodney Atkins, If your going through hell


So close,

Just a glimpse,

A memory is all I see,

Of what used to be.

I miss the places,

Those familiar places.

All I have to do

Is close my eyes to see,

A rode, a path,

I so often traveled.

I didn't realize,

That I would never

Travel it again.

Anything and everything,

Sends me back,

To this place, I want to be.

This place is now only

A memory to me.

A memory but never forgotten.

It's just a glimpse

Of what use to be.


The author's comments:
I had just moved and I was coming home from one of my brothers baseball games and I close my eyes and it felt like I was back in my old town.

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on Sep. 19 2010 at 4:13 pm
snowdrop SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
There's no denying the wild horse in us.
Virginia Woolf

i love this. it's very well written and i can practically feel your emotions towards this kind of situation. good job! :)

on Sep. 17 2010 at 10:24 pm
MadelineG BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
4 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the Moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars."

Wow, this is really good. I love the emotions this portrays. My dad used to be in the military, so I know how that feels to want to be somewhere you're not. This is great, keep on writing!

on Sep. 16 2010 at 9:36 pm
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
13 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don't worry so much.

i know that feeling of wanting to be somewhere it is almost impossible to be at the moment and closing your eyes and feeling like your there...i totally like this! =)