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Too Hard to Breathe

August 20, 2010
By temptedrose SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Be who you want to be!

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You surround me, ashamed
Making me slowly suffocate
Falling deeper in love to the vein
Every heartbeat I try to take

Amazingly stolen by your eyes
You got me hypnotized
A faint reaction to my brain
I know that things will never be the same

Bu-bump my heart goes
Barely making a beat
Falling down to my toes
I might have to take a seat

Although this poems cheesy
As I describe this heartfelt love
Though you might learn something cheeky
As advice to ot give someone a dove

© Kimberly C., Houston, TX

The author's comments:
I really like cheesy prince charming take my heart with you type poems and I think this poem is an example of my totally awkward romantic work.
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temptedrose SILVER said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 2:47 pm
temptedrose SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 0 photos 13 comments

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I meant 'not' but whatever