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August 14, 2010
By BrittanyMSwartz PLATINUM, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
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I blow,
and blow.
But the seeds wont leave.
I blow,
and blow.
But they still wont leave.
I know what's the point,
this wish wont
come
true.
But i still Blow,
and Blow hoping it does.
Finally I'm upset.
I pull of the seeds,
and throw them in the air.
What's the point of blowing,
when you can just rip it
off?

© Jessica T., North Hills, CA

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Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 11 2010 at 2:33 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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I must agree with the terse individual below me; this is very meaningful. You demonstrate through a poem the way that we expend our energy on our wishes. Well done.
starlight26 GOLD said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 6:01 pm
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*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

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Powerful meaning. Niceee :)

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