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Best Bet Hug

July 11, 2010
By i_am_nobody SILVER, Belgrade, Montana
i_am_nobody SILVER, Belgrade, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself, don't take anyone's sh*t, and never let them take you alive." -Gerard Way


We’d never met before,
But I still trusted you.
We’d made bets on each other.
And I still tried to protect,
you from me. You didn’t think,
that you needed that.
We’re very similar.
We both love hugs.
I wasn’t surprised when,
you wanted to bet who is better.
“Never lift me up,” I told you;
“You’ll get hurt, and I’ll cry.”
You did anyway.
And even though I screamed at you,
I was happy that you did.
…Sorry.



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on Aug. 25 2011 at 9:21 pm
i_am_nobody SILVER, Belgrade, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself, don't take anyone's sh*t, and never let them take you alive." -Gerard Way

thank you for the feedback. good to know im not a loner in something like this

on Aug. 24 2011 at 10:37 am
XxTickleM3EmoxX PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
L.Why is everyone O. trying to find it? V. Maybe it&#039;s hidden for a reason...E.<br /> <br /> If you look in the mirror and dont like what you see, you might find out first hand what its like to be me...

AMAZING! i can relate..

on Aug. 11 2010 at 5:41 pm
i_am_nobody SILVER, Belgrade, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be yourself, don&#039;t take anyone&#039;s sh*t, and never let them take you alive.&quot; -Gerard Way

thank you. i havnt really written something like this before so its always nice to kno what people think.

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 1:31 pm
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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i feel like there was something else behind those words... and it made me think... and thats good. sometimes poets like to talk in riddles (if this is what you were aiming for). Very good. spacing (like a new verse/paragraph might make it more powerful and blunt with the punch of words. And dont care what other people think about your writing its YOUR writing. if they dont like then dont read it. haha. keep writing  =]

on Aug. 5 2010 at 8:38 pm
Wolf_Warriorz SILVER, Belgrade, Montana
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I don't think it was. I liked it :)

on Aug. 5 2010 at 8:37 pm
i_am_nobody SILVER, Belgrade, Montana
7 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be yourself, don&#039;t take anyone&#039;s sh*t, and never let them take you alive.&quot; -Gerard Way

thank you, i was afraid that people would think i was a little  too blundt

on Aug. 5 2010 at 8:35 pm
Wolf_Warriorz SILVER, Belgrade, Montana
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This is awesomeness :) :) :)