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Alone

May 29, 2010
By Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"


I can’t say goodbye anymore, I can’t let my heart go through so much pain anymore. I just can’t.

Leave me, just leave. I will pretend that this year never happened, like it was all a dream.

Just leave!

Goodbye is all I say, deaths is all I’ve encountered with, leaving me is nothing new.

I can’t deal with so much goodbyes, I can’t.

But sadly I knew something like this would happen.

I knew that those phone calls would end, those sweet texts, those IM’s aswell.

You promised that you would stay, you wouldn’t leave me alone.

But I let myself care so much, I knew you would leave; like everybody else.

Will it be different next year, will you forget me, what we had?

Will you forget this year, our smiles and laughter,

Will you forget my kiss?

I can’t forget, I can’t pretend

We’re going our different ways, your going there I’m staying here,

Alone



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on Nov. 14 2010 at 2:34 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Gracias :)

on Nov. 14 2010 at 2:34 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Thank you thank yhu thank yhu :)

on Jul. 15 2010 at 11:01 pm
silenthinker BRONZE, Woodbury, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Is encouragement what the poet needs? Open Question. Maybe he needs discouragement. In fact, quite a few of them need more discouragement, the most discouragement possible. -Robert Fitzgerald

I really like this.  I love reading and writing free verse. The bittersweet memories and sadness in this poem are portrayed really well.

on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:13 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"

I really like this poem it is very sweet but sad all the same.