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Heart like Rain

May 28, 2010
By KTawesomoGIRL GOLD, Renton, Washington
KTawesomoGIRL GOLD, Renton, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"It's not what you do, but how you do it." -Jude (Across the Universe)

You don’t think I see
The way you sit
With your hip
Cocked to one side
Because you think you look so good
With that smile
On your face but it’s so fake
I can see it with my eyes

You look good you think
But inside you feel bad
Like a stormy day
In May
When the sun should shine
But it only winds down
Through clouds that rain
I can see your heart pain
Like them
Long dollops of tears thrown
From a headstrong girl’s head
Onto a pillow
And your hair like a
Willow tree around your face
And inside
Almost die

Shut yourself off but what
Good will that do you
When you need a friend because
On the outside there is
Me but
Inside yourself there is
Only you
And isn’t that what’s holding you back?

You look good you think
With that smile
On your face but it’s so fake
I can see it in my eyes

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This article has 2 comments.

Cookie said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 8:47 pm
You brought out some really important points that i think everyone can relate to... i especially loved On the outside there is /Me but/Inside yourself there is /Only you/And isn't that what's holding you back? Really good work. I also love how it started off with the image of a very arrogant person, and you slowly revealed their vulnerability.

AwsomePossom said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 1:53 am
ITS SO SAD!!! I love you!   Its pretty too, in a sad way, but....yeah. haha, this is a horrible comment.   haha, my name is the first thing that came to mind :)