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Poem in Blue MAG

May 23, 2010
By Dewdrop BRONZE, Maplewood, New Jersey
Dewdrop BRONZE, Maplewood, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Today you are You, that is truer than true. There is no one alive who is Youer than You. --Dr. Seuss


I'm feeling kind of morose.
In the stillness between morning
and night, where the blazing blue
light plays tricks on your eyes,
I skim the pads of my fingers
over a delicately frosted window.
When the crest of the sun licks the horizon
and life is breathed into the soil,
I remember you
and the melancholy feeling in my throat
melts away with the ice.



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on Mar. 28 2011 at 8:02 am
Jonesie3217 BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Immitiation is suicide

I loved this poem, "I skim the pads of my fingers" line was amazing(:

on Mar. 24 2011 at 1:06 pm
Shminkanator5000 SILVER, Rochester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"the only thing we have to fear is fear itself"

I think this was really cute! You really put some emotion into it, and I feel like the vocabulary you chose really brought it to life.