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For My Mother on Her Birthday

May 5, 2010
By turn_my_mistakes_into_gold BRONZE, Fredburg, Virginia
turn_my_mistakes_into_gold BRONZE, Fredburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"On a long enough timeline, the survival rate for everyone drops to zero."


Flickering candles
(metaphorically, of course)
Wave us
(these softened beings)
Into the past.
Standing strong like steel,
Refusing to break or
Bend around the other,
Like considerate ultraviolet rays
do
the twist cause
A waltz
Never fit our personalities.
A constant gaping of black hole mouths,
Neither larger than the other but each just as
Damaging.
Meteors
(refer to any number of apocalyptic films for full description)
Crashed along the surface of our negativity,
Skimming like stones heaved across a glassy lake
(notice the simile).
Eventually,
The black holes swallowed
The steel
And the meteors.
(It was very similar to swallowing crow).
SO
That brings us to
Today.
To you,
Today,
I offer this reminder:
We
(these softened beings)
Have made it through.
Despite the risky
Risk of re-creating a clichéd
Shania Twain ballad:
“We beat the odds together.”
An adorned cake
(symbolically, of course)
Ushers us into a new state of
Mind with a burst of orange flame.
Make a wish.


The author's comments:
I gave this poem to my mom very recently; she did not like it.

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insaneex GOLD said...
on May. 26 2010 at 5:20 pm
insaneex GOLD, Falmouth, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return."

I loved it :) She probably didn't understand it haha.