Love's Prayer | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. Love's Prayer

Love's Prayer

May 4, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
More by this author
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

View profile

I crave for someone to see my beauty
And accept me for who I am
I pray for someone who'll love me
Someone to hug and hold my hand

At night I look up and wish
That I will find true love
When my heart is tired of breaking
I get help from the lord above

I search for a deeper meaning
To every tear and kiss
I want someone to love in return
My other half, my heart, my bliss

© Carissa G., Aberdeen, WA

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Different
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
Lightning
By Rachel Bellah BRONZE
Seattle, Washington
Rachel Bellah BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment
View profile
Poetry
The Death Sentence
By Chris Shu BRONZE
Fort Lee, New Jersey
Chris Shu BRONZE, Fort Lee, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Summer Day
By Lost-In-Life GOLD
Whitby, Other
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s never to late, if it weren&#039;t for the last minute many things would never get done!

View profile
Poetry
Unreach Love
By C.J.H. BRONZE
Benciao City, Taipei County, Other
C.J.H. BRONZE, Benciao City, Taipei County, Other
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes the world tries ot knock it out of you. But I believe in music the way that some people believe in fairy tales.&quot; August Rush(2007)

View profile
Poetry
I thought I knew you
By traveler03 GOLD
San Juan, Texas
traveler03 GOLD, San Juan, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Living is nothing. Dreaming is something.

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 33 comments.

Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 2:28 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

View profile
thank you:)
AnimaCordis GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:58 am
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
13 articles 0 photos 131 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Evil is when the good do nothing&quot;

View profile
I love your use of ireggular ryhmes and use of imagery. This is another peice I realy, really like.
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2011 at 9:52 am
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

View profile
You're welcome. :)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Nov. 17 2011 at 3:27 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

View profile
Thank you Jacob:)
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 2:52 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

View profile
Wow...  Volumes of words that I have striven so long to find in only three paragraphs... Bravo, nova, bravo...
Healing_Angel SILVER said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 12:31 am
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
8 articles 2 photos 509 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for today, not for tomorrow

View profile
AMAZING!!! How do you do it? I can relate to this right now! i get so jealous watching the girls with their boyfriends and I wonder "Will it ever happen to me?"
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 5:35 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

View profile
Thanx everybody:)
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 10:46 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
225 articles 4 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One day, your life will flash before your eyes; make sure it's worth watching."

View profile
I LUV IT  AND CAN TOTES RELATE! Awwwww
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 9:39 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is either an adventure...or nothing&quot; -Helen Keller

View profile
I agree wish SamiLynn! :) this is so cute! :) and romantic but sorta sad but veryyy amazing at the same time :) 5 STARS all the way! :)
SamiLynn PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:37 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
20 articles 9 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The unexamined life is not worth living.&quot; ~Socrates

View profile
awwww :) i think EVERYONE can relate to this! this is so romantic :)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Sep. 4 2010 at 10:37 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

View profile
Thank you Jynxx:)
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 3 2010 at 11:37 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we&#039;re doing it- Neil Gaiman.<br /> Who are you to be who you are?-Le&#039;Na Pernell

View profile
i can really relate to this! 5/5 stars!
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 7:16 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

View profile
Thanx for the feedback:)
InsaneKitten BRONZE said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 10:15 am
InsaneKitten BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even shadows need light..... &quot;Melissa Marr, Ink Exchange&quot; :D

View profile
awww so beautiful "cries"
amandap PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 2:42 pm
amandap PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
31 articles 0 photos 183 comments
View profile
oooh I love this! its very petite, which is stupendous for this poem! it sums it all up in just a couple stanzas! gorgeous!
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:46 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

View profile
thank you very much:)
writingchick GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 3:44 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase.&quot;

View profile
Love, love, love, love, love (times 10) this!!! hahahaha. if that made sense
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:30 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

View profile
Thank you:)
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 7:38 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life. Don&#039;t talk to me about life.&quot;<br /> ~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker&#039;s guide to the galaxy series)<br /> Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone<br /> (hahahahaha! I love this cause i&#039;m never ever ever in tune &gt;o

View profile
i. love. THIS!!!!!!!!! this is wonderful! its going to be rated 5 stars and tagged as my favorite. thank you so much! :) <3
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 2:44 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

View profile
Thanx everybody I appreciate it:)