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This Feeling That I Have

April 28, 2010
By jeffreyboyer83 GOLD, Providence, Rhode Island
jeffreyboyer83 GOLD, Providence, Rhode Island
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This feeling that I have,
Of pure love and desire,
Is too hot to handle,
Hotter than a blazing fire…
This feeling that I have,
Of pure love and affection,
I just can’t escape it,
It’s like an incurable infection…
This feeling that I have,
Of pure love and attraction,
Can only be described,
As pure and utter infatuation…
This feeling that I have,
Of pure love and magic,
Is like I’m in a trance or spell,
And you’re the one casting it…
This feeling that I have,
Of nothing but pure love,
Is purer than anything on earth,
Even purer than a dove…
Now that you know,
How much I care for you so,
I’ll leave this last message with you,
That you are the one fueling and powering,
The feeling of which no one else knows.

The author's comments:
This is definitly one of my better poems. I actually wrote this in my spanish class at school while I was looking at the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. I hope you guys like it... Jeff

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on May. 18 2010 at 1:29 pm
MiSs_ShAe BRONZE, Bristol, Tennessee
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