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Evil had a beautiful

April 28, 2010
By princess4ever BRONZE, Tripoli, Other
princess4ever BRONZE, Tripoli, Other
1 article 23 photos 73 comments

beauty can hide an evil soul
large baby-blue eyes
pearly white teeth beneath kissable pink lips
body of a model
He was like a magnet pulling me towards him
like light at the end of a tunnel
his outside as hot as the sun,
inside as cold as ice

persuading me with

his wink

his smile

making me love him more and more
while he had been loving four

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on Jun. 21 2010 at 11:24 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Uh I love it...I was so captivated reading it...amazing!

on Jun. 19 2010 at 6:02 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

whoaa thats a really good poem! the last line is like 'omg..i see..' the piece also had outstanding word choice. u did amazingg

on Jun. 18 2010 at 2:16 pm
CrystalDE PLATINUM, Concord, North Carolina
24 articles 197 photos 166 comments
Wow, i really like this a lot. This meaning is very true and mostly yes for teens. Love it!