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slipping MAG
April 26, 2010
I see you slipping,
Falling from sight,
I try to reach for you,
Try with all my might,
I hear myself call for you,
And that's when I realize
That you don't want me to.
You don't want me to catch you,
You weren't even bumped,
You're not slipping at all,
You jumped
© Jennifer T., Hanson, MA
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ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE said...
on Mar. 30 2011 at 3:25 pm
this. is. AMAZING. you literally took my breath away. dang! this is my favourite!
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on Mar. 30 2011 at 7:30 am
very good i like your way of your writing and how you turnd it around
unique4evr SILVER said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:30 pm
this was really good! it gave me chills! omg! can you check out my poetry and see what ya think and anybody else! thanks and keep writing!
Wow, I have to say, I usually hate poems that have any sort of rhyme scheme. But this gave me shivers. It seems like you used the light-hearted lilting of a rhyming poem to get at something much deeper, maybe even darker. I think this is a fantastic piece.
Untouchable-Summer SILVER said...
on Mar. 28 2011 at 8:37 pm
This was amazing! Don't know why there aren't more comments on this!
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