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Human

April 14, 2010
By thats.about.it. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
thats.about.it. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
4 articles 4 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was the kid next door's imaginary friend. -Emo Phillips


I am a human

But I am a virus
I see

The destruction all around me
I feel the breeze

Or is that what my brain tells me?
I know all they teach

To God I know nothing
I dream of life

A life I’ll never have
I say something poetic

But it comes out a jumble
I need air

Even as I lay dead
I want to know

Why exactly I’m here
I hear your heart

Beating like a drum

You are human

But you are a machine.



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on May. 19 2010 at 3:55 pm
Sketched97 PLATINUM, Silver Spring, Maryland
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I agree, its clever. good job! 

on May. 18 2010 at 7:47 pm
justsmile164 BRONZE, New York, New York
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"Talent is nothing without character."

the metaphors are very clever, and creative. great job!!

We-R-3 BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2010 at 6:59 pm
We-R-3 BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
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A picture is worth a thousand words, however it takes a real artist to turn words into pictures.<br /> <br /> Have you heard about the new Lebron Iphone, you have to set it on vibrate because it doesn&#039;t have any rings

The association to viruses and machines was very creative I love the symbolism