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Just behave

April 17, 2010
By DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend


Tell no stories
Sing no songs
Play no games
Dance no dances
Make no music
-Quiet-
Please children, just behave

(break away)



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on Jul. 28 2011 at 7:34 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

i'm not sure i like it, i just think the end is a bit of a dead beat but thats just me, i hope i'm not too harsh because i do like your pieces! :)

on Jul. 23 2011 at 10:35 am
Delictious GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
16 articles 5 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I would like to be remembered as a woman who did the best she could with the talent she had.&quot;

It's a great concept. A lot of people I bet, especially on this website, can relate to it! It's short and sweet, very easy to read but it leaves you with so much more than just a few lines of a poem. You pack a lot of emotion into only 8 lines, which is very nice! Good job!

on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:52 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
&lrm;&quot;I&rsquo;m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don&rsquo;t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world.&quot; - Beyonc&eacute;

Maybe, movements is better than dances in the 4th line. But it's just me, so...

This poem is good - short and easy to read... Keep it up :)

on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:45 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

Short and sweet!  It's a nice poem, saying how kids aren't supposed to have fun.

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 7:43 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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i like it! it's true. so much poer in a few lines. I could hear crickets chirping in the silence part. you know how this made me feel? I don't behave. haha. Good job!

on May. 11 2010 at 8:18 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

I agree, so much meaning in so little lines!!! Its like God telling us to behave and stop being so selfish!!!

on May. 11 2010 at 5:23 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone&#039;s crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn&#039;t he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

Thank you very much.

on May. 11 2010 at 4:07 pm
reillysmiley22 GOLD, Hoosick Falls, New York
18 articles 4 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don think ive said to many serious things that can be admired and arent totally foolish, but my all time favorite quote is &quot;Only those who dare to fail greatly can ever achieve greatly.&quot; - Robert F. Kennedy

as short as it is, this poem is so powerful, i really like it