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The One I Miss

March 22, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
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There are times I miss your voice
All the things you used to say
I wonder if you meant it
Before you walked away

I miss your arms around me
As I dozed in your embrace
I miss seeing the smile
That would light up your face

I miss your lips on mine
So much love in that first kiss
I cannot settle for another
For it is you I miss

© Chris C., Milford, CT

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This is one of the many poems I wrote after my boyfriend broke up with me.
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Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 10:06 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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By Me:)

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Thank you both very much it means alot to me
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 9:42 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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this is sad :/ breakups are hard...still getting over mine...:( This is a great poem I think everyone on this planet can relate to it :) good job!
SamiLynn PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:39 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
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awww first kiss! im sorry u guys broke up :/ im missing someone a lot too. just remember the memories and never lose them :)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 8:34 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
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Thank you:)
mudpuppy BRONZE said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:51 pm
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First love, so sweet. :)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:32 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

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Thank you so much for commenting everyone:)
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aww oh my, this was outstanding. i loved the rhyming-ness and the word choice.. good job! ur a greatt writer :)
SarClark BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 10:16 pm
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Wow. Very classical style, always a good thing. 

Great job with the rhyming. The order of words was good, too. 

It's also where a lot of us have been, just wondering. I think this is great. 

Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 1:20 am
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By Me:)

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Thank you dreamer:)

 

Just.A.Dream SILVER said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:43 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

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Great job expressing yourself! I can tell this came from the heart. :)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 2:11 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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By Me:)

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I know you won't:)
Frog-Prince PLATINUM said...
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I won't be this guy. 5 stars =)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 8:43 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
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Thank you:)
sam013 DIAMOND said...
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Great! really shows emotion. good work :)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:26 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

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Thank you I'm glad you understand:)
JoetheBlanc GOLD said...
on May. 25 2010 at 10:10 am
JoetheBlanc GOLD, Roswell, Georgia
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wow, another perfect poem! i see no grammatical or rhythmical errors... and all of that besides, this speaks alot to me. when you break up, your heart still loves. every person you kiss becomes a part of you, no matter how small. 
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on May. 23 2010 at 12:11 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

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Thank u:)       
JacobC GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 6:27 am
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Great.  I gave it 5 stars.
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 11:21 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

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Thanx Lostangel:)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 11:21 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

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Thank you:)