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Redeemed

March 22, 2010
By Alissarose PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
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Alissarose PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
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"Roses are red, violets are blue. My rose is white and its bleeding for you..."

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Trust.
You have lost my
trust...

Respect.
You have lost my
respect...

Now here we are.
A struggle to
stay together...

Once flawless,
now realizing you are
not perfect...

We'll make it through
but it will take
some time...

Mistakes.
You have made some
mistakes...

Big deal.
We are only humans
who don't know better...

Redeem.
There is no need to be
redeemed...

© Greg K., New Lenox, IL

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