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She Left the Earth (maybe)

March 19, 2010
By shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

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I cried for you tonight
I'm afraid I've lost
you, lost you for good...
Lost my best friend, until
I go to heaven

I'm scared that you've actually
left this time...

© Jack B., Central City, KY

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Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 11 2010 at 6:22 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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this is really sad and emotional and well written. very nice.do your dance.
Whisperer PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 9:13 pm
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this is really short but also really touching. good work :) i love it
deardiary BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 8:19 pm
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Wow, it says so much in so little words. The title is especially revealing- love it!
Eilatan GOLD said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 6:43 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
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How beautiful...
yesimdarrian101 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 11:43 am
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this was really touching and deep. good job. :)
shelterisland GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:20 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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-Biting&#039;s excellent. It&#039;s like kissing only there&#039;s a winner.&quot;-Doctor Who, The Tardis

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thanks              
kiwi12 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 6:52 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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daw, this touches me so deeply. Very evocative. Good job!
shelterisland GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 4:58 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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-Biting&#039;s excellent. It&#039;s like kissing only there&#039;s a winner.&quot;-Doctor Who, The Tardis

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and also, thanks
shelterisland GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 4:55 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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-Biting&#039;s excellent. It&#039;s like kissing only there&#039;s a winner.&quot;-Doctor Who, The Tardis

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kk, I'm going to look at both of your writing.
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 3:16 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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This is very nice. Keep writing. If you have time, please check out my work. Comments and ratings are greatly appreciated.
KayKays222 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 2:38 pm
KayKays222 BRONZE, Ordway, Colorado
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I like this and I can relate to it. You should read some of my stuff and tell me what you think.