Sonata | Teen Ink


March 29, 2010
By KittyCrescent1818 SILVER, Lawton, Oklahoma
KittyCrescent1818 SILVER, Lawton, Oklahoma
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too many.

Keys playing slowly
Softly pacing one by one
Ebony and Ivory
Both in unison now

Filling the air with sweet sound
Refreshing as the mountain air
Hands going over each note
With delicacy and care

A sonata empowering
Enough to make the sky weep
Tears of stars and a face of glowing moon
Into the bones of those the music seeps

Each tone pulling at a beating heart
Emotions never falter
This music, from end to start
So modest in its tune

Able to make one laugh or cry
Making the heart live or die
Hidden feelings boil true
To the sounds of this soft tune

Two people humming it now
So low only the night can hear
Their love forever glowing true
The sonata of the moon...

The author's comments:
I wrote this a long time ago, my inspiration being my piano! It's funny how something can take you so far.

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This article has 5 comments.

on Apr. 5 2010 at 12:16 pm
luckiness BRONZE, Vienna, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Minds are like parachutes. Just because you've lost yours doesn't mean you can borrow mine.

love it!!! i play the piano :D this is really great!! def. 5/5!!! 

on Apr. 3 2010 at 4:00 pm
sarahsinginrain SILVER, Setauket, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Art, in itself, is an attempt to bring order out of chaos."-Stephan Sodeim

It was great. I love the subject matter and how you made something like the sound of a piano even more beautiful. Great job!

on Apr. 2 2010 at 7:07 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
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"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

This is really beautiful, I play the piano myself and this is a great and descriptive piece. My favorite part is the last two stanzas. Great job, 5/5

on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:51 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is very nice. I like the emotions and imagery you pull into this piece. Its so passionate.

Please if you have time, check out my work and rate. I would greatly appreciate it.

                               ----Shernay B

on Apr. 1 2010 at 6:58 am
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
18 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

nicee, you brought the effect of the drama with perfect word choice