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Something is missing

March 10, 2010
By Sweatheart SILVER, BPT, Connecticut
Sweatheart SILVER, BPT, Connecticut
5 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can do anything

Something is missing I can feel it

Something that can make the beauty of nature live once again

Something that can prevent violence once and for all
Something that can stop ambition and selfishness forever
Something that can bring back hope and faith back into our lives

I know that something is missing
That thing is love
But hopefully our generation can bring back love into the world
It is up to our generation for a better future
We all miss the pure love that used to be in the world and it is up to us to bring it back

The author's comments:
please write comments i beg you and vote stars too!!!!!

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Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 9 2010 at 3:18 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I gave you a 5 before start reading it becuase I like the title!  love can touch us only one time in life and last a life time thats what I was thinking the whole time i was reading it!

Check out my work, post your comments, it inspires me to write more when people post comments, negative they're or positve, we all have a way of writing :)

on May. 5 2010 at 6:59 pm
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
21 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
Love Always. :)
When the tides of life turn against you and the current upsets your boat, don't waste time and tears on what might have been, just lie on your back and float.

I like it, very insightful and well written. Continue writting, I wish you the best, you're talented, keep it up! Check out some of my stuff please? Comment and rate? Thanks so much, I'm giving yours 5 stars! :)

on Apr. 17 2010 at 3:23 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

I love this! You are an excellent writer, and you should possibly continue this poem! Please, if you get the chance, comment on my newest article "Is There Reason?" Much appreciated. Keep on writing!

on Mar. 23 2010 at 7:59 pm
Sweatheart SILVER, BPT, Connecticut
5 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can do anything

please write something guys